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Friday, May 16, 2008

Essay Drafts of Movie


I'll write about one of my favorite movie, "Edward Scissorhands" as a movie essay.
The director of this movie is Tim Burton. He is my favorite director!! And the cast is my favorite actor, Johnny Depp, Winona Ryder, Vincent Price and so on.

This is a story about Edward who doesn't have common hands.

He has Scissirhands instead of common hands. And this movie is a sad and love movie about such his love.
He was lonely in a big residence because the man ( Vincent Price ) who had invented Edward died.
So he was lonely, and he didn't know outside.
But a woman visits his residence as a saleswoman. And he meets the human except inventor.
She takes a big fancy to him, so she comes home with him. But his daughter Kim ( Winona Ryder ) doesn't like him because he is odd, and he has scissorhands.
From there, this story starts.
Although this story is very sad, I feel warm something.
For this reason, this movie attract many people.
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2 comments:

massy's room said...

I wonder that this sentence is incorrect. "a woman visits his residence as a saleswoman" Maybe I think this is past. So " a woman visited his residence as a saleswoman. " I don't have confidence in my opinion, but write just make sure. :-D
Your blog is so cute and good grammar. Thank you.

Rick said...

( Vincent Price )
no need for spaces inside the parentheses!

By the way, you should use two labels for this post: "essay drafts" and "movies".

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